This sounds really rough. No real soul to it. Just sounds lazy to me, and no real attention paid to anything but the lead. Where is a strong bassline? Where is harmony? Where is ... a good hi-hat rhythm outside of the main drive? Nothing is gelling. Nothing is reinforcing. It just sort of falls into pieces at the phrases. The lead is too loud. The snare is too loud. Transitions are too loud. Can't hear much of anything else. Just very weak and piecemeal in general.