Excellent voice acting and funny pronunciations. Fantastic!
Excellent voice acting and funny pronunciations. Fantastic!
The vocals aren't syncing up quite with the song. It's kind of weird. The music isn't bad, even though I can pick out the synths. Literally sounds like you ripped the acapella and pasted it over the mix after trying to get the bpm close. NG could get a DMCA complaint for this probably too. It's also not house. Alas, it's a popular song, so you're going to get hits no matter what.
Next time you try a remix, don't rip the whole acapella in one shot. Most people recognize this. Use samples of the vocals in different places, with delays ping-ponging, or w/e. Anything to accentuate that this is your version of the song. I would take this one back to the drawing board, no offense.
Little repetitive, and there is a lot of redlining distortion going on in this mix, esp the drums. Try a master limiter. It's not unlistenable though. Kind of trippy. Keep hitting the mixer!
The vocals are nice, but the instrumental doesn't really feel hip-hop to me at all. It's almost totally out of sync with the acapella at 2:30. I can easily pick out the piano preset -- lot of amateur mistakes going on here that need cleared up. Maybe I'm missing the point.
I'm glad someone really tried to "look" over my work and see if I'm capturing the right vibe. I have been needing someone to really help me find a sound and stick to it.
Beat is on point, but this probably belongs in olskool sylistically. The mixing of the vocals could use a bit of improvement too. It's not enough to cut noise. Probably want to clamp some chorus, compression, etc. onto it. It sounds really dry. Lyrical composition isn't bad by any means but could use more content. There's a lot of points where it's just the beat, no obvious reason for entry and exit, etc. Also, some of your stresses on the syllables sound unsure, like you're searching for the beat. Keep it up though. The first part of success is the courage to begin.
Thank you so much for your input! As always I'm working on creating better content.
The tags are annoying, but this is some good shit. I think you got the wrong genre -- should be in olskool. Flow is on point though, and your vocal mix is good. Subtracting half a star for no fade out. It just kind of stops short.
Sounds like Mixcraft instruments, those bells, tbh. Not bad stuff, but it could use some polishing -- modulation, velocity, more precise volume leveling, master limiting, and maybe some 808's thrown in. Your percussion kind of lays there too. Don't get me wrong, it's not bad. I can see the effort. It's just not perfect.
Now you just need some fat ass 808 bass under this. Interesting. Master limiting could probably help it along a lot too.
Thaaaaaaaaaaanks EDM364!
This is pretty dope. Only thing that jarred me was the toms. Too much high end on them I think, or just too loud. Japanese samples are really nice, but they sound like an American is saying them, or a Japanese instructor, lol.
Thanks man! I shouldve looked for some better samples :D
The only thing that could be better about this is your vocal mixing -- vocals are clear and sound like you practiced. Diction is on point. Just doesn't sound quite professional. You know how mainstream vocals have compression, chorus, delay, etc. That extra edge. Good shit though!
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