I appreciate how strange this piece is but not the velocity of those open hihats being the exact same on repeat hits. That's very distracting. I would take down the open hihat level.
You manage to make synth guitars sound alright so there's that.
For your outro, I think the synths besides the sax are a bit too loud.
The mix is clean due to minimal treatment of the entire track as a whole. I'm not sure about some chord choices, particularly in the intro. And I'm not sure what to make about the track. Very interesting!
Thanks for coming out to NGUAC!