ADR3-N's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Stickman Vs Cursor 2]

Animation is okay. Could really use smaller and cleaner lines, though. I feel like this has already been done with Animator vs. Animation.

chrisbasso responds:

Yeah, that will improve i learned a few things on flash tutorials. sorry for the messy lines. :/

[Bounty Hunter Speed Paint]

Don't usually see many speedpaints around here, but this one is alright. Couple criticisms. The skin doesn't really have a lifelike tone to it. No one ever is really that color of yellow. Also, watch your light sources, and detail the hair a bit more. Otherwise, not too bad.

XavierStarr responds:

Thanks, was trying to make her less human and more of another alien race, didn't turn out too well, needed to add more defining characteristics then the yellow translucent skin.

[B Town]

Pretty good. Could use more blood, and it would be nice if the characters had transparencies around them rather than that white border. Assuming you did try to fix that though. Good work!

[Noah's Ark]

Haha, leprosy dogs. Funny stuff here! Great use of music, good volume leveling, and good voice acting. Good work!

[Dragon Ball Z Super Saiya]

Pretty good illustration and coloration. NG strongly wards against using copyrighted music for videos, though. Maybe use some from the Audio Portal once in a while?

With your skill, you could probably dominate the portal if you focused on animations or flash comics.

Bloodyanimation responds:

thanks yeah i think so to the critic are hard around here since the begining i'm here thanks a lot men

[ZP Adventures Episode 1]

Voice acting is a little indistinct, and the backgrounds and characters are a little bland. Other than that, not too bad!

[Batman mines bigger]

Not bad! And decent voice acting. Good use of sound effects. Pretty fluid. Could use some background music, though. There's plenty in the Audio Portal. Why not put it to use?

duffosaur responds:

thanks i'll make sure to add something in the background in the next video

[Eat Your Vitamins, Kids!]

Voice acting is impeccable. Animation is good. Cohesive style. Not sure about the message -- accuracy of the vitamins, but considering they're getting it from a shady icecream mobster, what the hell, right? Great work. :)

Michael-T-Scott responds:

Oh, all facts are backed up by hours of research. And all that statement means is "It's made up BS."

[Another Planet 3]

Good story, but the voice acting is almost indistinguishable from the storytelling, and from other individual characters in places. Try panning the audio a little differently. Other than that, keep at it!

LetThereBeLenny responds:

I know theres not much nuance in voices between the characters, but the narration is actually Solace reading his notes

[Power Rangers Theme]

Audio was out of sync with the video. Also, NG is for animation, not live action. If you're going to do something like this, animate over it.