Solid structure, calm atmosphere. This is pretty olskool. Would blow down the house in the days of the Doors.
That drum loop is so familiar. I can't remember where I've first heard it.
I would say the area this song struggles is in lead writing, as well as from the first time the ... bandneon or whichever instrument for your solo is used comes in, it is virtually present through the rest of the song. I think a small flourish or two at the end of your solos' melodic lines would help push things along and really solidify repetitions.
Some experimentation with FX, transition sweeps, cymbal lines and hats and such would do well to keep things interesting. I found the lead on occasion to be a bit dry for the rest of the song but overall I think it fits. Something may be missing here, either in mixing or panning, I'm not sure.
The overall volume is quiet. Applying mastering compression or at the least gain in audacity would help quite a bit (do not allow clipping)
Otherwise, kudos for going out on a limb with this one. Keep doing what you do, and don't let anyone stop you. If you're interested in free instruments and FX, you can dig through my news posts. I post them when I get the chance.
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