UwU that opening is noice. Please tell me what that creaking sound is. It's a little too loud but I like it.
39 seconds I'm starting to feel like the intro is going on just a bit too long. 50 seconds, I've accepted it
I like your arrangement but think there is WAY too much reverb and the drums are too far down in the mix.
VERY NICE drum fill writing
I want to hear more bass throughout. The lead at 1:27 is much too loud without it.
Splendid writing.
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