ADR3-N's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Scrapped]

Pretty cute little animation, just could use a little cleaning on your linework. It would allow more detail on your characters. Effects look good. Keep it up!

Uranium92 responds:

ty :)

[Théorie sur l'univers]

This would be great if I could understand French better and the frame rate were higher. Your ideas are interesting and animated decently

papypoulpe responds:

Thank's ! :D
As this one was pretty much a test, I'll do the next with a higher frame rate ! I'm actually doing the english subtitles

[OMG l33k3d F00t@ge of Captain America 3]

Loving the style, and it's a good short. I'd give more stars for a longer animation with even a semi detailed background.

[OTB - Space]

Pretty great animation. Funny idea, and well executed. Try not to let your P's and F's get into the mic though. They're really loud and jarring. Subtracting half a star for that. Maybe just get a better mic because the voices don't sound quite natural on this one, or EQ your vocals before you use them. Either way, putting a sock on the mic or some sort of barrier right over the hole will help minimize these harsh consonants.

Excellent work!

RadioTubeClock responds:

Sounds like good advice, thanks for the review!

[Freeze (Short)]

Very short, but the animation is actually pretty smooth, especially the blood. Try something longer!

Aviator123 responds:

I got the blood from luizuri

[Where Snow REALLY Comes From...]

Short, to the point, funny holiday animation. Good work. Music could use a little improvement. It's very obviously synthesized and cheap sounding, if that makes sense.

JackSquatJB responds:

The opening and ending ones I made myself in a midi program, so yeah. The main toon I used a pro site. I didn't think it sounded off, but I'll keep it in mind! Thanks! And Happy Holidays!

[Alter Ego - Short Film]

Excellent. Really accomplishes a lot with a little bit in terms of animation versus dialogue. That impressed me. The speed of the movement of some characters was a little slow however. Coupled with the loud effects it was almost annoying how long it took to accomplish moving from one scene to the other. The effects were also a bit loud, so I had to turn my volume down. Could just be that they were very high pitched and squeaky.

Quite an accurate picture of the workplace! Great work!

FrameFreak2D responds:

Thanks a lot EDM364 :D

[Donz Christmas]

The art is decent, but the intro is far too long and the music again is terrible. I know you do not wish to use music from NG for whatever reason, however, if you simply went to go looking for a loop in the Audio Portal, I would have given a vastly superior score.

ToonymanStudios responds:

thanks! but still i ask that you be a little more patient with me on the music. think about it like this remember companies that started off small and now are so powerful that you could'nt compete like Comcast. it's all about how you plant your seed.

[stupor]

Animation is decent. Your scenes are reasonably well drawn for a second animation. Animation is actually pretty smooth, especially for a new animator. You're getting the hang of it. Now you must tackle sound!

[NOEL but maybe J]

Decent for a holiday animation, but the idea and delivery are a little stale. Could spend just a little more time getting that delivery right so you sound less like you know you sound stupid and more like those idiots that don't actually know they're idiots, so it's a little funnier. I like your concept of using images to animate, though. Reminds me of some of the old adult swim cartoons I used to watch.